Ok, first, this is decidedly off-topic forseen, and I am fairly sure this isn't going to go well, but I will try my best...
forseen wrote:formation of planets, i was writing a book that had the formation of planets in it, and then watched a tv show with a man talking about accretion. When i saw this it made me hurry up and just write an article on this because i wanted my theory out there first because it's all about accretion. I was upset he coined the phrase before i did, but he did not know the whole process. Since then i wrote the life cycle of planets which is now being studied. So here is my theory in short form.
Accretion is not the only possibility. Velikovsky 'saw' a violent past where accretion involved planets & large masses ripping & tearing at each other as they snooker-balled around the system. electric Universe sees a markedly different paradigm. Accretion is not a new term, it was being bandied about at the least, back in the 1950's
forseen wrote:The sun is a ball of fire which as we all know burns, Anything that burns expells carbons
There're 2 current theories for the Sun, neither of which is a 'ball of fire' that burns. One is that it is a thermonuclear furnace, which in no way 'burns' & the other main one is that of again, the Electric Universe, in which the Sun is an arc point, fed by electric & magnetic fields that permeate the galaxy. The Sun doesn't, & can't burn in the way you are supposing.
forseen wrote:Our whole planet is made of carbon.
Um... no, it isn't. Carbon is just one element of the planet. it happens to be the basis for most of the life forms here, but that certainly doesn't mean carbon is even the most plentiful element of Earth. While it may be true that the elements that make up Earth came from nova stars, (supposing the Standard Model is correct) they could not have come from the Sun - it is still a mostly hydrogen ball making helium - it is, thankfully, nowhere near the carbon cycle yet, & hopefully not approaching the iron cycle for a LOOOONG time to come.
forseen wrote:As these carbons are discharged into space some of them become trapped by the magnetic field, the force of gravity and temperature barriers.These carbon particles accrete at these points.
Carbon is non-magnetic - you can test this by waving a magnet over charcoal or other form of carbon. If you have an old style pencil handy, you could try that - not only is there carbon in the wood casing, the 'lead' is graphite, a form of pure carbon. I'm betting the maget doesn't lift the pencil or even make it move.
forseen wrote:But we also know anything that burns shrinks as it expells its fuel, with that said, i believe that pluto was the first planet and mercury is right now our last,
As above, the Sun isn't 'burning' so this doesn't apply.
forseen wrote:Because i believe all planets have a metalic core and for a metalic core to form will need a lot of heat to cause metalic particles to accrete. These planets have to have a metalic core to stay in the suns magnetic grip.
I'm not sure where you get that idea - the major metallic cores are in Earth & possibly Jupiter. Jupiter is a maybe because they think it might be metallic hydrogen, ie. hydrogen compressed down to the point where it forms a lattice structure. Earth has a molten metallic core giving us a magnetosphere. Venus doesn't seem to have anything like the same magnetosphere, nor does Mars, so if they have metallic cores, they are solid.
We're pretty sure Saturn, Uranus & Neptune don't have cores at all, although that isn't backed by a lot of evidence. They don't, however, have large magnetic fields so it would seem to contraindicate the presence of a metallic one.
forseen wrote:Another proof my theory is correct is that mars used to be covered in water but now isn't and thats because mars is moving away from the sun or the sun is shrinking or both and now the earth is covered in water because it is the perfect tamperature for water to form, Just like fog forms on your windshields. It's the same process. Temperature forms moisture. As these planets get farther away from the sun and begin to cool they will start expelling its moistures. This is a short version of my theory but if you're interested in more, reply to this and i respond as much as i can.
Actually, Earth is only allowed liquid water because of the greenhouse effect - we are actually outside the 'bio-zone' NASA is looking in for habitable planets. But ignoring that... fog forms on the windshield because there is water already present & when it hits the coolth of the glass, it precipitates & forms droplets on the surface. It isn't 'forming' as you would have it. Water, that is, H
2O can form under many conditions & the conditions decide whether it forms as gas, liquid or solid. It's even possible there's a plasma form of water - certainly we're finding out some very strange & interesting things about how water behaves.
Temperature doesn't form water - if you wish to get into details, look into some chemistry about covalence bonding & how molecules form. If anything, high temperatures (such as the Sun) would destroy molecular bonds & prevent them from forming.
Mars is not devoid of water because it is moving away from the Sun - it isn't moving away. It is (perhaps) lacking water because it lost its atmosphere. Once the pressure drops, water 'boils' at ever lower temperatures, so the water would evaporate rapidly into an ever-decreasing atmosphere. That's if it isn't still there under the surface of course.
I think you will find that, by evidence, the Sun is actually increasing in size, not shrinking. If the Standard Model is correct, this is a process that will continue for the next several billion years until the hydrogen runs out & the Sun turns into a red giant star, with a surface somewhere out around Earth's orbit.
It is good to think of hypotheses, but one must be careful that one uses the available evidence rather than personal beliefs to try to turn the hypothesis into a Theory. I'm hoping your book was about something else & the planet formation was merely a sidebar. If not, I think you have a lot of work in front of you.